I got one of the most useful piece of feedback today after posting the snowball poem
A guy asked what the purpose was. Not adding anything not saying anything
That helped
So I realised, maybe it's super obvious to others, that when I write poetry I should have a purpose - do something ambitious with the beautiful language at my disposal
This time my aim was to write anything in the form asked . But that's not good enough. Remember patke. A poem is the way the poet is trying to say something
A guy asked what the purpose was. Not adding anything not saying anything
That helped
So I realised, maybe it's super obvious to others, that when I write poetry I should have a purpose - do something ambitious with the beautiful language at my disposal
This time my aim was to write anything in the form asked . But that's not good enough. Remember patke. A poem is the way the poet is trying to say something
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